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satoko cannot be lambadelta

ryushi despite writing a lot fails to transition peopel from one thing to another cause he characters feel weak when it comes to fundamentally changing or motivation.

satoko changintg into evil witch makes n osense and straight up looks terrible.
firstly, satoko never even once showed malice at all towards people or sociopathic tendencies.
For example, even when she was fighting against literal soldiers she used her traps that didnt bring physical harm. All her traps are always safe to people. Another problem is that satoko is victim and so she clings to others, thats major part of her personality the way she clinged to her brother, keeichi and rika.
For her to suddenly become extremely competent makes no sense. Also satoko was sick with L3 himezawa illness, that~s why she threw her parents off the cliff.
When Shion tortures Satoko or beats her up, she never shows sign of anger or vengeance. Instead she doubles down and thinks of herself as problem.
When Keechi says he "killed Teppei" Satoko wasnt laughing or enjoying it. satoko only got scared of him which shows lack of self-righteous mentality all together.
satoko is barely capable of cynical thinking like that. thats why the story is awful.

fuck IDFand ruyuksiushi